Airship commission

What ambitious lineart! I love all lines in the hair and the deck. It give it great textures. I guess you can put some knots in the woodwork. I'd just doodle in swirlies wherever it seemes appropriate (has way too much experience painting 'wood' sets for theatre).

Okay. For simplicity's sake, I'm naming these character otherwise I'd go insane.
The left one is Daisy 'cause of the bloom tucked behind her ear and other is Captain since she seems like in charge with that hat.
From the sunrays at the upper left, I can deduce that this was your main light source and the highlights on Daisy's arms and wrap skirt are right on. Even though the sun seems to be hiding behind the Daisy, another light source is lighting the captain-lady directly at the left. This same idea is happening on Daisy's face. You see how you shaded Captain's torso half-n-half? That's how Daisy's face should look in theory.
I guess that's all I can critique about the light.
btw, I love Daisy's boots. To me, those heels are sexy and your signature smooth shading really suits the leather-look of the boots.
Your cloud painting abilities make me so jealous. The wispy ends make them more realistic than just poufy lumps. I love that they have body and have more than just white and grey in 'em.

Unfortunately (or fortunately in some cases) I don't have a dA pro account and I couldn't leave a "critique" but I hope some of my comments helped! o.o;